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M4 Carbine

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AiLeiKe
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Mon Oct 15, 2018 12:46 am

Hey guys!

Finally finished my M4. You can see the full project here: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/XBeAv3

Any feedback is appreciated as always! C:

Here are some renders :

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Ezegal
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Mon Oct 15, 2018 9:39 am

The whole model looks very nice, and you made a commendable labor on details and all inner stuff. But I have pretty strange feeling about your material choice (cheekrest, shoulderpads, grip, magazine and handguard)... Are you pleased? Else is great! :icon_thumbsfallout:
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Mon Nov 19, 2018 9:41 pm

Thanks! I wanted to go for something different so I looked up various parts and I put the ones I liked together. I'm pretty satisfied with the results :)
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Tue Apr 30, 2019 9:46 am

Woahhh dude, gotta love that disassembled "explode" view :realization: Big thumbs up for investing the time and effort to create those parts as shown man, love it! :)
Neat choice of weapon as well, you certainly did a fantastic job on this :thumbsup_dude:

In terms of feedback, and this is just some humble personal opinion :icon_redface: : I feel that some edges, especially on the receiver parts, feel a bit hard. Not sure if this is the bake of normals, or the edgewear that makes me feel this way. Eventually some softened edgewear could also make the materials and overall appearance even more interesting; Have you seen the Substancedays presentation of Ethan Hiley? He explains this very well :)

(Not sure if it jumps to the correct time, but it's around 1:44:19 :icon_thumbsfallout: )
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